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Let me introduce you to
The man who pays your wages and
Collects when all your bills are due and
Tried to start a rubber band and

Laughs at all your crappy jokes and
Files his teeth down to the point and
Flicking fingers poking spokes an
Oil can for every joint and

Let me introduce you to
That lovely girl who takes your cheques and
Calls her girlfriend Crazy Sue and
Drops the anchor, swabs the decks and

Plays her earring back and forth
Between her fingers heavy lids and
Sets her compass North by North but
She's at auction; no one bids

And if these two forget-me-nots
Bump asses in the shopping queue well
See if where they touch they rot
Their latching knuckles turning blue

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poetry! i'm lazy. but i think this one is ok. Thoughts, y'all?

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:iconkillthemouse:
I like this enough to give it a +fav. And I don't click that button without a long internal agument.

I don't know why I like it so, though. I just do.
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~Inordinate Sep 7, 2005  Student
Alright, cool. I don't mind creating inexplicable favourable impressions. Cheers, man. Appreciated.
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:icongrallian:
« She's at auction; no one bids » fav!

I can ear a song in here, very quick and angry! cool, cool, cool! congrats!
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:iconinordinate:
~Inordinate Sep 6, 2005  Student
:D Thankyou very much for the fav and for your support! I'm glad you liked it!
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~Inordinate Sep 7, 2005  Student
Thanks! It's support like that that keeps me writing! Cheers.
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:icongrallian:
no prob! I can relate to your writing, it's very truthful and agressive. I like it. :D
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